FEEDBACK: this is the tutor’s feedback(sketch on the left) on how to improve the camera shot.
1.I think I’ll take the advice on shot 1 and 2 (when the dog approach the door) I’ve been told my choice of composition is too flat. I think the problem might be the setting on the camera length. When I use 135mm one, everything looks more flat and it conveys a feeling of peeping through the camera. And when I use a 35mm one, the camera looks into the whole scene deeper and tells more information but it is harder to control the composition.
2.I’ve also been told that the third shot is nice so I guess I’ll use it. I was advised that the monkey shot should be on the left. I think I wouldn’t put that way when I have my final piece(a rendered one). I prefer a composition with a character in the middle, though it might lose the narrative of the story. I always prefer the aesthetics.
Goal for the past week: building the first previz.
Difficulty: find a beautiful composition that can show the narrative of the story.
next week’s goal: improve the composition following feedbacks and research.
feedback sketch
My four main shot
The shots
SCREENSHOTS